These days, people work in more than one job , and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and diadvantages of this ?

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A generation
ago there
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ago, there
were
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so many
people who create and made their career in
one
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stream.
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However nowadays
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However, nowadays
people want more money for making their life luxurious with less
efort
earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something
effort
efforts
.
This
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essay will look at the core reasons for
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and propose some solid reasons and solutions.
One
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of the main causes of the problem is that
,
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,
so many people think that continuously changing the
job
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is very helpful to gain more money in less
time
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period, but it is not true
,
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,
sometimes it works. In majority it will not get success.People have been often changed their
job
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of getting more and more money so it is a reason behind to change the
job
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oftenly
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. Some
time
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due to weak economy of that land or nation is not for that type of jobs who do by that
person
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that
time
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to changing the
job
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is the only option for that
person
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.
they
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They
had no opportunity to do
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
work, who they like to do.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
this
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is the main reasons behind
this
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problem. Another problem is that the unemployment of that land or nation,
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is the other causes of people work on more than
one
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job
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,
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,
Because of like example that
person
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has a fear about the
job
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which doing
,
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,
Due to over population his boss has the power to dismiss that
persone
a human being
person
without any reason because his boss
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
many scopes to hire another
person
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who more intelligent than his employ. People who doing more than
one
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job
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is, sometimes it is harmful for their life, but who care about the
helth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
all humans
are want
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want
their self in the race to become a rich. Turning to the other side of
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conversation
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,
That
person
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who did their
job
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in particular
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one
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field was getting more benefits from that company, like a pension, provident fund
,
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,
medical cure and so on
.
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.
Nowadays there are so many facilities given by limited and government companies which are fascinating to people. They give several types of benefits to their employees who are doing the
job
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with long
time
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
the conclusion of doing only
one
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job
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and give our hundred percent in that
job
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will
beneficial
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benefit
in the future. At the end of
this
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topic, The conclusion is that people have to decide to do their
job
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in particular
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one
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stream without getting
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
any greed from another organization. Business man
always need
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always needs
loyal
person
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in their company. But
also
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
say that people who selected that
job
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and he has no interest about to it so it is worst about both side employ can not do their work properly and it is not good for organizing and they fire
their
people in general
they
employ.
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