you are going on a month trauning programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I will be joining the SAP Training programme

month and I just learnt that you are looking for someone among the group to coordinate the social

events

during the course. I am really interested to manage

such

events

as I enjoy very much

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mingling with the other people around me. It would be great if you can share more information on the

events

being planned and their timings. I would

also

like to know that these

events

are planned at the same office where we will be attending the training?

Also

, can you please let me know if there are any outdoor activities on the list which requires travelling? I want to let you know that so far, I had handled 15 different

events

during my college days, and I was awarded as the best organizer during my sixth semester. Every event has left many memorable moments, friends and good knowledge sharing. Waiting for your response.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

169 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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