you are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have
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Dear Sir/ Mam,
I am writing in response to the role
social
Change preposition
of social
events
organiser that you advertised in the course description email. I would like to volunteer to take this
position and have a
try.
I have always worked in teams while organising social Correct pronoun usage
it a
events
. It’ll be really hard to make all the arrangements by one person. So, will there be any
assistant for Correct your spelling
an
this
role? How many social events
will be held during this
one month
training? Will these social Add a hyphen
one-month
events
only involve the students on
training or will there Change preposition
in
also
be social events
in connection with external institutions?
I love making arrangements and bringing happiness to people. I have a lot of experience in organising social and public events
. I was the public events
organiser and coordinator
when I was in university. I had organised a lot of Add the comma(s)
, organiser and coordinator,
on campus
performances, parties and Add a hyphen
on-campus
also
holiday tours for students. They all loved my events
. I can always get the job done regardless of the requirements.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Jing WangSubmitted by flower on
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