You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Alex Anthony writing
this
letter to bring
into
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your notice that, I had enrolled for a
cricket
course
at your sports club two months back.
However
, due to my health
condition
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I will not be able to finish the
course
. Since my childhood, I am a great fan of
Cricket
and it’s my favourite game.
This
course
is most distinctive for me. Another most important reason for joining
this
course
was, that every candidate will get the opportunity to meet and have a
cricket
session with one of the greatest cricketers and god of
cricket
Mr.
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Sachin Tendulkar. I can not continue
this
course
since I got a fracture on my left hand and the doctor advised me to take
rest
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for six months.
This
news depressed me a lot. since I had a good batting average and good keeping strength among all the players in our batch.
This
also
brought sadness to my entire family. Till now I have only attended a few classes of the
course
. I was wondering is there any refund policy for the remaining month’s
course
. I shall be grateful to you
,
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if you can arrange a refund. Please respond at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully, Alex Anthony
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