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Recently some people can work from home using modern technology. Some say this only benefits the workers, but not the employers. To what extnet do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 day and age, the development of
technology
 allows people to work from another space
such
 as
home
Suggestion
a home
. Some people believe that only the employees can reap the benefits from using modern
technology
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 tend to claim that both workers and employers gain enormous merits from
this
. On the one hand, with
help
Suggestion
the help
 of advanced
technology
, workers can save massive money and time for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 from
home
 to the office.
Therefore
, the pay more attention to work and family by reducing the excessive stress of commuting between office and
home
.
Likewisw
Suggestion
Likewise
, money saved in travel is used to
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
 the demands of family.
Moreover
, they could manage to spend more quality time to carry out domestic responsibilities
such
 as picking up the children after school. Another good illustration of
this
 is these individuals are able to share the
houseworks
Suggestion
house works
 with their family
.
Accept space
.
On the other hand
, using modern
technology
 brings several benefits for employers. By utilizing the advanced communication
technology
, they could run the operation of their business easily. The clearest example of
this
 is entrepreneurs could hold teleconferences
instead
 of previous traditional meetings or they can supervise workers effectively by making video calls. In conclusion, modern
technology
 not only bring benefits fo
r the worke
Accept comma addition
workers, but
rs but
also
 bring advantages to the employer who prefer to work from
home
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