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You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Mike, Trust you are doing well, Myself, John brad would like to thank
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you and your team for the memorable stay we had in your hotel "Sea view Resort",
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 week from 22nd May 2020 to 27th May 2020.
To begin
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5 star
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, the bar and the swimming pool are the low points of your property.In my view, you should stock and serve international brands of wines and whisky.The pool should have
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 lifeguards and other accessories like floating for kids and towels for drying after the swim. , which were not available at the time of our stay. To conclude, the Inn is better in comparison to other properties in the area. I wish good luck to you and your team in the future. Regards, John Brad
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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