You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Mike, Trust you are doing well, Myself, John brad would like to thank

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you and your team for the memorable stay we had in your hotel "Sea view Resort",

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week from 22nd May 2020 to 27th May 2020.

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with, The location of the hotel is simply superb, which gives the best view of the sea and beaches from any of the rooms of the resort. In continuation, the housekeeping and service from the kitchen, which serves

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, the bar and the swimming pool are the low points of your property.In my view, you should stock and serve international brands of wines and whisky.The pool should have

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lifeguards and other accessories like floating for kids and towels for drying after the swim. , which were not available at the time of our stay. To conclude, the Inn is better in comparison to other properties in the area. I wish good luck to you and your team in the future. Regards, John Brad

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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176 words

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