Traffic congestion in major cities is an increasing problem, yet there is an environmental impact to be considered when building new roads. What can be done about this problem?

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In our day to day life we are dealing with one of the major problems is traffic.
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, cities are dealing with
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problem and villages are
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a bit
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the safe
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problem.
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of
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situation and will put my thoughts how we can mitigate it. As per my view even in towns
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few of the places
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with traffic congestion.
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, IT companies
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located
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are located
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and which is the ultimate choice for other businesses due to demand. Due to
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reason public travels to that location all the
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for their works and daily needs. In
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scenario we can assume how the roads appear in a peak
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during the day. Everyone wants to reach the destination on
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Unfortunately, they are not able to do so and end up
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in spending
most of the
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on
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the road
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, If there are different routes to reach the
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destination, then
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there will be only one congestion point
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, the office timings should be odd to mitigate it. Here is the
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solution to deal with
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problem which is, to build another road.
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If
we are going with
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option we should be careful in designing the path in
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away
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a way
which should not lead to pollution to the surrounding places. We should revisit all the consequences and design a plan. To summarize the situation, when we are looking for a mitigation plan with the traffic congestion we have to look for all the
possibilies
a future prospect or potential
possibilities
before going to build a new road as it it is going to lead in the environmental issue.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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