Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behaviour and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion

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uniforms differ from
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dress codes, which set rules about what cannot be worn but do not need a specific set of attire. Some
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uniforms are the codes and
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uniforms are
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restrictions limit students’ freedom of expression. While on the other side some group of people
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Uniform Policy serves as an improvement in a student’s life, but it restricts students’ freedom of expression and could be costly. In
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essay I will discuss both the views.
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uniforms make schools safer for students, create a “level playing field” that reduces socioeconomic disparities, and encourage children to focus on their studies and not their clothes. Students focus more on their studies and what is occurring in class than being less concerned about the clothing the students are wearing.
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uniforms have helped decrease violence and theft. It has helped prevent students from concealing weapons under baggy clothing, making it easier to keep track of students on field trips and make intruders on campus more visible. Uniforms promote positive behaviour and have allowed students be part of the
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spirit and to be proud of their
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pride.
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, students’ right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behaviour and academic achievement, and emphasize the socioeconomic disparities they intended to disguise. Students love to experiment with their
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clothes
and accessories and to have to wear uniforms now limits students to express themselves; it is restricting individuality. Sometimes clothes can show your opinion emotions and expression. Many opponents believe that
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uniforms do not stop bullying and may increase violent attacks. Uniforms make bullies better to target students from the public, especially from other schools. In my opinion,
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opinion, I like the idea of uniforms. It is more cost-effective, helps prevent students feeling different based on how they dress, and ultimately creates convenience for the student and parents. If it were up to me, I would love to see more schools choose uniforms over the regular clothing.
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