It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.

The today’s family-life changed a lot. Many parents are

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divorced

, a lot of mothers and fathers have their job’s far away from home. The children are often alone and

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lacking companions or companionship

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what are the reasons for

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happening?

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of all, I think that the modern technology is one of the main

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problem. Many parents

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in their nearest cities from their home. They

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with computer in big offices and came home late at night.

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, they have no

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to look after their children. In the past, families used to

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"as a family". Every member worked hard and helped the family to

survife

continue to live through hardship or adversity

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farmers.

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, the education used to be

controled

restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds

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by the parents, not like today’s day-schools with teachers and professors.

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, there must be a solution to bring

separeted

being or feeling set or kept apart from others

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separate

families together. At my point of view, families should spend their free

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together. I am thinking about weekends or the

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after

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. Children need their parents even when they are older. To give a reasonable example: I often go out with my parents, mostly for a dinner.

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my brother and I speak about our future plans or something else. An

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characterized by a high degree or intensity; often used as a combining form

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conversation is a possible solution. A similar way is, to divide your job into half-part

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-times and spend your free

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leftover with your loved persons. A point against

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statement is to have financial problems. To sum up I wish that every family is as close as possible with each other, if they like that.