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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore students should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

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As it is truly said that, the physical exercise is a crucial part of our daily life. Some people think that, It is our parents responsibility to make sure that their children are doing the physical exercise on
daily basis
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a daily basis
 and there should not be any physical education classes for them so that they can utilize their time of other activities. Those who opine that it is
onus
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the onus
 of the parents
this
 is because they think that, every young child learn most of the things from their parents and they can learn easily from them. Most of the parents have two or more kids to take care of them so that they can easily figure out that in which sports like cricket, basketball, tennis and skating
etc
informal term for a meal
eats
 their children are interested but in the
school
 it is hard for teachers to recognize the talent of every single child from a large attendance of class.
Therefore
,
Accept space
,
parents should provide
their children special
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their children with special
 coaching
in
particular sport
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a particular sport
particular sports
. But
on the other hand
, it is mandatory that the sports lesson should be a part of the curriculum activities because it will increase a
competition
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competitive
 level in the students
moreover
 it will encourage them to enhance their skills.
For example
,
annual sports day
Suggestion
the annual sports day
 should be arranged in every
school
 to motivate the students. Every
school
 should send a list of good sports player in the national and provincial level competition so raise the level of
school
 and students. In the conclusion, I ag
re
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oth state
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statements
ment that our guidance should prompt us to physical activities and our institution
also
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lay equal
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an equal role
equal roles
role in
our su
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
cess in every field whether it is sports subject or other subjects
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