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You have a full time job and are also doing part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Describe the situation. Explain why why you cannot continue at this time. Say what you would like to take.

#time #job #part #course #situation
Dear sir
,
Accept space
,
 I am
Sarabjot Kaur student
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a Sarabjot Kaur student
 of your Accounting coaching centre and I am writing to inform you that I was taking the payroll course from your institute from 20
th
 April and wanted to be continue until I reached my
advance
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advanced
 level. Unfortunately, I cannot pursue
this
 programmer anymore. The prime reason that I need to step back is that I got
promotion
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promoted
 at my workplace and offered with more responsibilities. So, to make schedule less hectic and to work smoothly I need to have to take action to abandon my course.
Although
, I had planned all things in advance, but my children's at home as well as working week days are
comparitiveky
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
comparatively
 more than what I can possibly handle.
Consequently
, I am the one who will be responsible for the duties delegated towards my work.
Hence
, to make balance of work and life I have taken
this
 crucial step.
Nevertheless
, I am looking forward to take
this
 course in
next
 season until
then
 do reserve a
sit
show to a seat; assign a seat for
seat
 for me in advance so that I can brush up my skills once again and enhance them more quickly and efficiently.
Lastly
, I hope you will be compassionate enough to understand my situation. Yours Sincerely, Sara
Submitted by Sarab on

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