Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

It is argued that

celebrities

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celebrities, for

for example

movie actors, musicians or even

atheletes

a person trained to compete in sports

athletes

earn

overwhelming amount

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the overwhelming amount

an overwhelming amount

compared to other professions. I completely agree that their income is extreme compared to their impact, and that professions like nursing, pharmacy should equally earn higher.

This

essay will discuss

firstly

, the fact that it is extravagant, and

secondly

, the outcome of

such

investment. Spending hugely on entertainment only proposes a case of misplaced priority, while nurses and pharmacists who directly impact the health of the nation do not make half of what the so called stars take home. Thess health professionals are ever ready and willing to sacrifice their time and happiness for the

welbeing

a contented state of being happy and healthy and prosperous

wellbeing

weeping

of the people. The recent

coronavirus

pandemic is a prime example, where the whole world depended on the health system, which they spend poorly on for safety and

protection whereas

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protection, whereas

the entertainers were all locked down in their homes, waiting for the pandemic to be resolved.

Secondly

, looking into the lives of our celebrities, it can be agreed that

majority

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the majority

a majority

of them

as a result

of the high inflow of money they

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

are associated with crimes

such

as money laundering, drugs etc.

This

is due to the fact that they do not have any reasonable means of giving back to the society in terms of work, so they focus on themselves and find different ways of being happy and trendy.

For example

, the recent survey conducted by that National Agency for Food and Drug Administration and Control in Nigeria uncovered that 75% of drug abusers are celebrities. In conclusion, the

networth

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net worth

of the celebrities is

extravagent

unrestrained, especially with regard to feelings

extravagant

and have yielded little or no positive outcome.