Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some of us think that the
nature
should be protected by the
gouverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
not by
thepeople
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the people
individually.I can say that I disagree with
this
point of view because the environment should be the preoccupation foe each other. Nowadays the industry area is in continuous development and
this
can damage the atmosphere.Even if there are a lot of rules regarding to pollution not everybody
respect
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respects
this rules
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these rules
this rule
.A major implication has to have the politicians with very good and strictly programmes
implementated
forced or compelled or put in force
implemented
for the preservation of the
nature
.I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that us like humans need to be implicated in
this
fight for
nature
s preservations'
.
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.
For
example people
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example, people
should be more careful with their behaviour in
nature
,
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,
they should not use so much electricity and try to be more economic in order to
minimalise
represent as less significant or important
minimise
the consumption of natural resources like coal.
This
coal burning
produce
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produces
a very high pollution.The protection should stars from our houses
,
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,
for
example we
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example, we
can reduce the consumption of water
,
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,
or we can recycle more often.
On the other
hand we
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hand, we
need some governmental rules and punishments for those who did not
respevt
(usually preceded by 'in') a detail or point
respect
the environment
.
Accept space
.
Politicians need to be involved in
preservation
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the preservation
of the
nature
.All of us live in
this
world like simple persons or public persons and we have to join forces and to keep the
nature
safe and unpolluted. In conclusion, environmental protection should be a problem that include both sides, politicians and individuals too.
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