Some educational systems make students study specialised subjects from the age fifteen while others require students to study a wide range Discuss both views

Job oriented education is getting implemented in many countries throughout the world. While some colleges focus on
scattered range
Suggestion
a scattered range
of subjects, many others have adapted courses with
speciality focus
Suggestion
a speciality focus
during the final years of graduation. In
this
essay I will discuss both sides of these trends.
Traditionally universities
Accept comma addition
Traditionally, universities
frame the course with wide and mixed
amout
a quantity of money
amount
of subjects. The reason for
this
belief is that as a
socil
relating to human society and its members
social
animal, professionals have to deal with different scenarios and people and the cross related
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
helps better.
For example
, an advocate which
only need
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only needs
to study legislation requires the
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
of mathematics and language to present the data and evidence in the court to win their case.
In addition
, many of the students were not only chose a subject very early stage of decision making, but
also
the
influvance
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
from
Suggestion
of
parents and teachers were
also
exist. The wide
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
help
Suggestion
helps
them to choose a specific major as their interest as focus and interest changes.
On the other hand
,
humen
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humans
women
are learning new subjects and topics every day. If they are specialized on a particular subject, the
amout
a quantity of money
amount
of work they have
to adapt become
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to adapt to become
slimmer and they can focus on
part time job
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a part time job
or other activities which can
help their futher
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help further their
help their further
help their father
help their fathers
growth.
Moreover
, with the advancement of technologies
such
as internet and mobile, all the
informations
a message received and understood
information
area
eazily
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
accessible in the world wide web with a single click. All of these
helps
Suggestion
have helped
a candidate to secure or specialized
in
particular job
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particular jobs
a particular job
and their future becomes stable. Many organizations and companies around the world recruit students with a diploma or degree with
specilized
developed or designed for a special activity or function
specialized
on
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in
the area they have to work for. In conclusion, Wide range of
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
in subjects helps students to think and act quickly
to
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in
the
adaptive
Suggestion
adapted
environment, but with the help of modern technology students with specialized
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
can be
succeded
attain success or reach a desired goal
succeeded
succeed
like other
enthusiasists
an ardent and enthusiastic supporter of some person or activity
enthusiasts
.
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