If you could make two changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system.

In my country, İf a had a chance to develop educational system, I would organize exam coordination, and
also
quality
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the quality
of the education. I will briefly elaborate in terms of reasons and possible solutions in
this
essay. In the modern life, technology and
educational
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education
system are changing considerably without a healthy connection.
Therefore
, some issues can occur which affect to study.
For example
, in my country, university entrance exams are not convenient for the youth, because of teenagers must continue with
face
to
face
lessons like as the past. The majority of the students do not want to join ongoing classic classroom. Their generation which was born in the digital age bounded to the screens. To engage to focus these lessons should given with online
cources
education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings
courses
, and the students have not to keep
face
to
face
learning.
On the other hand
, there is a decline in the quality of education in these decades. To eliminate it, the authorities who work for Education Ministry should control how many students are in a learning hub, how much money for its budget is
requirement
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required
to provide scientific equipment, or other major issues should inhibit
firstly
.
For example
, in my town, the lecturer
take
Suggestion
takes
control
to
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of
the class's population in order to alleviate
crowded
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crowding
.
Besides
, The most crucial step is the money
fooound
set up or found
found
fund
and
supportance
established by them for the school's equipment. In conclusion, if I was a manager or work for
Education
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Educational
Sytems
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Systems
, I would have suggested two essential aim to eliminate of the system's failings. Primarily, the
prevelance
the quality of prevailing generally; being widespread
prevalence
of the every class is restricted, and
then
, with the high quality equipments should be taken to depict lessons for young individuals.
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