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Some people have the same type of job throughout their life time while others prefer to change of the job they do discuss why people choose to do both and give your opinion

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It is argued that a number of people tend to keep their same career in their whole
life
.
Never the less
Suggestion
Nevertheless
, others are interested to alter their
job
. From my point of view, I prefer to
do
engage in
make
change
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changes
 in the
life
 pan. How the decision must be studied carefully with full analysis of pros and cons and to be done on long interval of time. On one hand, the decision of staying in the
job
 for
long period
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a long period
long periods
 of time can be attributed to
number
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a number
 of factors.
First
 and foremost, some people avoid
to do
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doing
change
 in their lifestyle in order to be in the comfort zone and they believe the implications of
change
 aren’t precedented and always followed by worry and stress.
Second
, they convince that staying for long period reflects loyalty to the organization and gives potential and rise through
ranks
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the ranks
.
Last
,
vast majority
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the vast majority
 of people don’t have alternatives to
change perhaphs
Accept comma addition
change, perhaps
change perhaps
 it depends mainly on demand of
job market
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the job market
.
On the other hand
, people are keen to switch their career on
frequent basis
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a frequent basis
, they believe that
change
 is
healthy
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a healthy lifestyle
healthy lifestyle
life
 style and it is extremely interesting so as to avoid a rut which leads to burn out.
Furthermore
, they persuade by having
flexibility
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the flexibility
 to
change
 career they will be a
verstaile
having great diversity or variety
versatile
 and have
wide range
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a wide range
 of experience.
Last
 but not least, some people
feels
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feel
destatisfied
in a state of sulky dissatisfaction
dissatisfied
 about
existing situation
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the existing situation
 and they aim to have
better standard
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a better standard
 of living and professional development so they work on themselves to have better
job
 prospects
inlife
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in life
. To sum up,
change
 is
healthy
Suggestion
a healthy lifestyle
healthy lifestyle
life
 style and it will keep
life
 worth to
living
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live
.
However
,
such
 sort of decision must be absolutely studied to avoid any negative influence on
life
.
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