Some people think that having a set retirement age of 65 years for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?  Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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is optimum for a professional to retire is a matter of debate. It is

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considered by a few that certain employees should get a premature retirement and pension rather than waiting to turn 65 years of

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for their emoluments. I agree with

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statement and

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believe that individuals performing certain jobs like labourer and manual workers should be retired before reaching the

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of 65 years. It is granted that certain job like practicing medicine should have no

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limits because of the more experience one gain, the better healer he tends to be.

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, a pre-set

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of retirement does not

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for every profession. Those workers who are involved in laborious

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should be retired from their jobs and given benefits before they reach the

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of 65 years. It is logical because the average human

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expectancy is around 75 years globally.

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a person, who is supposed to be retired from his job at the

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of 65 years, is left with a decade hardly to live a

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of his dreams. Since many

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workers are low-wagers, getting a pension or the commute money are the only source of income through which they can lead a

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that they have aspired to.

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, manual jobs are physically demanding and require a healthy body which is seldom a case, in the current situation, where the most common

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for geriatric diseases to start is 50 years, particularly in the developing world.

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kinds of employments not only affect the health of an individual, but

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compromises his

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efficiency.

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, transferring these positions to the newcomers who are healthy and young would be another benefit that can stem from these measures. I think labourers, miners and construction workers who are busy in physical

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are people who would get the maximum benefits out of these actions.

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, a few of those clerical staff who is facing a problem of bad eyesight and find it straining for their eyes to sit in front of the computer and

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get benefit from premature retirements. In conclusion, it is beyond doubt that the

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of retirement should depend upon the

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expectancy and type of profession. It is

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suggested that manual workers and labourers should be given respite by retiring them at an appropriate

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age so

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age, so

that they can enjoy their leftover years of

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in peace.