The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays

, it is widely argued that when people choose a career or a

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,

majority

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the majority

of them think highly important factor is

the high

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higher

income rather than anything else. I completely disagree with

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statement as money is not everything after all. Not like

previous generation

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previous generations

the previous generation

, new generation looking for a high income decides on a

job

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or selecting their careers. But when you choose a highly paid

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without thinking about the

job

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satisfaction sometimes you have to face serious consequences, like working under a management that treat you like a robot. As an

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example, if

your management force you to complete your targets inside a time frame that you cannot finish,

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you have to work after office hours and sometimes weekends to complete your task. It means you have less time to spend with your loved ones

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at

home.

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may affect you in different ways,

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as family matters and depression that forces you to leave the

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and losing your career on that field as well. People used to pick jobs with high

salary but

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salary, but

in my

experience most

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experience, most

important part when you decide upon selecting a

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that suits you rather than picking a well paid

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. In these days most of parents

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want

their kids to become a doctor, engineer or a lawyer. Because of that they are pushing their kids to learn hard without letting them to do other activities. Parents do

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because they want to see their kids getting a highly paid

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in

future

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the future

. But they never think what actually their kids want to do or who they want to become when they grow up. Sometimes if they become a professional soccer player, tennis player or a cricketer as they wanted to do, they will earn

lot

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a lot

of money and same time they will be

happy what they are

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happy with what they are

doing and it will make a good career for them until they retire. In conclusion, doing a highly paid

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is not the ideal thing if

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you

doesn’t have the

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satisfaction and what you actually want to do. Most Of

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The Time

Because of that you will end up without your happiness. Most of

all people

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all, people

need to understand money can`t buy you everything at all.