These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Job
plays a major role in everyone
life but
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life, but
, it is being found out that many peoples tend to do, not just
one
particular work and not only that it is
also
found that they don't tend to stick with
one
particular type of
job
and they tend to do several others in their
life
. In
this
essay I would like to talk about its benefits and as well as its drawbacks and provide my point of view with suitable examples.
Firstly
, Many peoples all over the world are found doing more
then
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than
1 task in their day to day activity and even tend to change their
career
if needed many times,
this
can maybe due to the lack of passion or lack of money. If we talk about its advantages
then
, I would say that it gives
one
the opportunity to explore the market and showcase its talent in multiple platforms, but
on the other hand
it sometime can hinder
one
's
career
.
For example
, A person working as a teacher, in the morning worked as a tutor, but after working hours of school, he does other work which might be his hobby or doing for extra cash,
then
it gives him the opportunity to explore both types of work, but, there is chance that he might loss interest for
one
job
which he did
firstly
or less concern for both the jobs.
Secondly
, If
one
changing their
career
many times
then
it might be as they are not sure of what they are interested in and
this
can be disadvantageous in their activity as they won't have any surety of what to do later which can effect if daily
life
being. Not only that, yes it give him advantage by learnig different works and it does open many doors of
job
, but I believe is that if
one
person tend to leave the path which he choose
first
,
then
it is hard to choose and continue on another path, so I am sure of even after learning so many skills it will be hard to success unless he tend to stick with
one
particular
job
which interest them the most. To summarize, it both have its pros and cons, but I believe that working as a part time might be still better
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
changing
career
many times in the
life
, we learn new things I agree with that, but what is the point if we loss the sight of our core interest and follow to just experience other path which might lead us to our doom.
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  • Skill diversification
  • Versatile
  • Professional network
  • Career advancement
  • Job satisfaction
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Market value
  • Job insecurity
  • Financial strain
  • Specialization
  • Adjustment periods
  • Unemployment
  • Deep expertise
  • Long-term benefits
  • Retirement plans
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