Traffic and housing problems in major cities can be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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In many cities,
traffic
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and housing problems always raise some discussion nowadays. Some people believe that moving large companies to the countrysides can help solve these problems. I disagree with
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idea. On the one hand, the argument in
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promote over another
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of relocation big enterprises would be that big companies have too many people which is the cause of these problems.
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, a world-known enterprise named Alibaba in Hangzhou city has almost 10,000 staff in their office buildings who have to commute every
day which
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day, which
increases the burden of
traffic
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, and who are more likely to afford a house in the
town
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, which makes the housing problems tougher. If all those huge companies being moved out
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of
cities, there would be not that many cars on the road and not so many houses needed in the following years.
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, these tough problems of
traffic
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and housing could be tackled.
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, I consider that moving big companies out of cities is not the right way to handle these problems.
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, even though big enterprises are
moved
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moving
out, the number of people would not see a decline, because the staffs of these firms can
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buy houses in towns in order to have a high-quality life as most constructions, like supermarkets, cafes, and gyms are located in cities.
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, if these big companies were moved out of a
town
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, there would be fewer competitions in many aspects
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of
small firms in
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town
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, which would encourage people to start more companies,
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, more employees would be recruited in
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town
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.
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, there are more key solutions to handle these problems,
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, building more public transports to reduce the number of cars to commute, and building more welfare houses to stabilize the house price. In conclusion, while moving big companies can reduce the number of workers in cities in the short term, the problems of
traffic
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and housing do not be solved for good.
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