As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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Some people think that machines provide us great works in translation and

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therefore

learning a different language is not useful anymore

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I completely disagree the statement given above and think that knowing a language is critical for face to face contact and that

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kind of translations are devoid of the sentiment

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One the one hand

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As computers enable us to translate different languages

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it is essential to communicate

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Thanks to that

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people having different native languages can understand each other by sending messages and e-mails.

However

, When ıt comes to talk with someone in reality, not

virtually

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virtual

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using translates can be annoying

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because writing something that you want to say and waiting the explanation take a long time

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Hence

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learning

another another

any of various alternatives; some other

another

language has a great importance in order to communicate either

fastly

with rapid movements

quickly

or smoothly.

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the other drawback of using computers to translate is that they may harm the literature

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software programmes

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software, programmes

utilizing for translation can not reflect the author's feelings

such

as longing hate or love and thereby

this

kind of works will be devoid of the sentiment. Because only people can understand the exact emotion of the writer given in a passage

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For example

, all the novels and poetry books are translated by the translators in order to give the sense of article to people. As it can be understood from the example

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Different languages still should be learned by people. In conclusion

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Although

computers are used for translation

oftenly

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they

can not

cannot

ensure suitable conservation and reflect the essence of

writings

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the writings

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Therefore

People

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the People

must continue to learn foreign languages.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

281 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities

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