Some people say that cooking food at home is a waste of time. They claim that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowdays
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Now days
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most people believe that prepare
food
at
home
can take time
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they
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They
tend
go
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to go
to
restaurant
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a restaurant
the restaurant
restaurants
.
it's
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It's
best choice
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the best choice
a best choice
in
modern world
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the modern world
a modern world
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To being with
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the most rational justifications is that making
food
at
home
is healthier than
restaurant
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That is
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if prepare
food
at
home
take daily time
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the result will be
,
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we have safe and sound body
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A good example of
this
way to have
certaine
definite but not specified or identified
certain
methods for diet is direct on Peace of mind.
eating
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Eating
food
at
restaurant
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the restaurant
a restaurant
restaurants
is turn will change quality of lifestyle
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In addition
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another compelling argument against eating
food
at
restaurant
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a restaurant
restaurants
the restaurant
this
is true that
restaurant
server's
food
faster and you feel more comfortable
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but don't have what is ingredient the
restaurant
use
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To put it differently
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the material for making
food
is important
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some times
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Sometimes
Some times
we spend A lot of money and valuable
time but
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time, but
without
hight degree
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a high degree
high degree
the high degree
of standard so How to prepare
food
its more important and have
direct effect
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a direct effect
on job or daily event
.
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In conclusion
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Making healthy
food
at
home
helps us live a healthier, stress-free life, and going to a
restaurant
in the long terms has an irreversible effect on our eating habits.
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