Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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Whether it is reading story books or playing games to nurture

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the immediate descendants of a person

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hidden talents, parents throughout the world try best to flourish their kids’ career and growth. It is proven that interesting activities can enhance creativity and skills in children, but saying that reading is less significant, is a conservative statement to say. Sport activities like cricket, hockey, basket-ball

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a plethora

of benefits for enhancing various skills in children. Sports not only tickles the curiosity of young

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teaches essential lessons of the life like team work, handling failures and maintaining discipline. Playing games like solving puzzles and other mind games increase the mental abilities of the kids. Activities like painting and dancing, intensify the horizon of imagination and creativity of the little ones.

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, children can have strong physical and mental fitness. But reading

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play a vital role in the upbringing of toddlers. Reading books

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numerous advantages. It strengthens knowledge, boost confidence and amplify imagination in students; It enhances vision to see things from different perspectives.

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, it improves to have command over a language.

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, many parents feel that spending

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in reading is wastage,

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should be utilized in different activities. They

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point that, reading does not attract the young one for long and kids get

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easily. To exemplify, school syllabi covers both study and other cultural, sports, and professional activities to teach student different aspects of life so that can not only get good career but

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become a better adult as well. But “Balance is the key to success”.

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to imbibe new learnings; it can lead to have

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a successful life

ahead. And parents play an important role to decide what to teach their

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. It is proven that indulging kids in fun activities can be one of the best way to make them develop new

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important to nurture different abilities.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

331 words

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