Some people believe charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree?

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People have different opinions about whether charity
organisations
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ought to lend helping hand to their own nation or any part of the world. While Charity
organisations
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of
developed
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developing
nations should help people of any nationality, I believe that help of
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by
in
developing or underdeveloped countries should exclusively for their own people. On the one hand, charity Institutions of
developed
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developing
countries generally have adequate amount of funds to cover the areas of needy people all across the world. These institutions are usually financed by the elites that make them able to render any kind of help, be it a
medical educational
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medical, educational
or any other at any corner of the world.
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, people of well developed nations are mostly backed up by their government and there are a few people who need support.
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, only 10% of
people
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the people
of the USA are deprived of basic amenities, which is very less as compared to the figure of underdeveloped nations.
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, it would be imperative for these
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to provide resources irrespective of people’s
country
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.
On the other hand
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, NGOs run by the people of developing or underdeveloped countries already have limited resources.
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, the proportion of people in need is far more. In the
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, India,
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, there are people who neither have bread to eat nor shelter to live in. If these
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help foreigners, it would be outright unjustified for my
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. So, they should indeed prioritise people of their
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.
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to
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, they should
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save money to be used in unforeseen situations.
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, the current situation, when the nation has been suffering from COVID-19 these
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are providing huge amount of money and other facilities to needy people that not only reduce the burden of government but
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decreases the probability of declining the economy of the
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.
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is possible only when they have limited their resources for their own
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. In conclusion, even though charity
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of
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in
developed
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developing
countries could help any person, I believe that it would less feasible for
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of
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
and developing countries to do the same.
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, they should help people of their own
country
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solely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charity organizations
  • help
  • people in their own countries
  • people in need
  • nationality
  • global solidarity
  • root causes
  • poverty
  • inequality
  • local community
  • international aid
  • balance
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