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People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?

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Sugar-based drinks are believed to be the most popular beverage among people.
As a result
, there has been a substantial increase in sugary drink consumption over
last decades
Suggestion
the last decades
.
However these
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However, these
 common drinks may cause a risk to human health. I will demonstrate the reason of these drink's popularity, their negative effects and the solution to reduce these drinks.
Firstly
, drinking sweets causes addiction. The main culprits are sugar or artificial sweeteners and caffeine. Once having a bottle of coke, these stimulants give you an instant boost and people tend to use another one to maintain and increase attentiveness and energy. Gradually, people seem to be dependent upon it and even experience signs of withdrawal,
such
 as headaches and poor concentration when stop consuming. Because of the variety in flavour, easy access showed as appearing in all the stores, food stalls or even in restaurants, affordable in pricing make sugar-base drinks are the commonest, the most loved beverage.
However
, a lot of researched have been conducted to prove that over-consumption sugary drinks causes numerous health problem. Some possible solutions to help tackle
this
 situation is to increase taxes, which make people think twice before shopping.
In addition
, the government should limit advertisements promoting artificially-sweetened beverages and educate citizens on building healthy eating.
Besides
, the manufacturing companies are forced to label warning messages on the packaging concerning heath effects as obesity
,
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,
diabetes Overall, sugar-based drinks are becoming widespread because they are inexpensive, common drinks, which can energize our alertness, but they
also
 do harm to our health.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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