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Eating too much of sugar is harmful for health. Some people think it is government's responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption while others think it is individual's responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued that obligation to limit
sugar
consumption
 belongs to the authority or individuals.
However
, these two parties can take enough portions of responsibility to balancing in order to minimize
this
 bad habit on society. In
this
 essay I will examine both views of the argument and trying to get a conclusion. Most of people think that the responsibility to limit the
sugar
consumption
 will be on individual side. Beside because it is their own will to eat or not eat and increase or decrease their
sugar
consumption
However
, It is only possible when the society having a good lifestyle or mindset that over
consumption
 of
this
 thing will bring negative impact to health. Obviously for people who thinks and only enjoyed consume sugars.
On the other hand
, Others people think that
sugar
 limitation its own authority.
Therefore
, it is possible for the
government
 having a good program that impacted to improvement and education, citizen regarding
this problems
Suggestion
this problem
these problems
, it could be shown by the regulation that the
government
 made in the future. In conclusion, maintaining a better lifestyle depends on the individuals as well as
government
. I believe that every human being must responsible their own health because if he/she does not want to be healthy,
then
government
 has nothing to do about it.
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