Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city to ask about a 2 day business trip for yourself and your colleagues. Include An introduction to your office Information about the business trip Other requests

Dear Sir I am Sonika Roy, head of Human Resources (HR) at Nomadic Advertising, New Delhi. I am writing
this
letter with regards to making
booking
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a booking
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at your hotel for a
2
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2-day
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day
business
trip
. We are an upcoming advertising firm based out of New Delhi, consisting of a group of 15 enthusiastic young minds who have come together to build
this
firm a great reputation in
advertising
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industry. We are aiming to organise a
two
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two-day
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day
business
trip
to Jaipur and stay at your hotel from August 10th to August 12th 2020. We are a group of 14 people and will need 7 rooms on
twin
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sharing basis for the said duration. The
trip
consists of meetings on
day
1 for which we need your conference room
,
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and local sightseeing on
day
2. I would like you to arrange a
day
trip
to
nearby
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tourist attraction for our group. I would like to make an additional request for airport pick up and drop for us, I will be sharing the details of our flights soon. Looking forward to a pleasant stay at your property. Yours Faithfully,
Mrs.
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Sonika Roy
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