Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company while others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some elderly employees have rich experience and life skills and some of them work on the old method, which not always spectacular. Some young employees are ambitious, hard working and multifaceted and some of them are lazy, mean and silly. It is
controversial issue
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a controversial issue
. In every company is
necessary people
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necessary, people
in different generations. To develop company workers
in
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at
different ages can
swapping
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swap
ideas and experience. Young workers can learn with
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
workers
also
vise
a holding device attached to a workbench; has two jaws to hold workpiece firmly in place
vice
versa. What young workers do not know may be know older. It is necessary that in one company to work all generations. Young employees more creative and always add
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
to your work. And they chase a career.
In
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To
think that
elder generations
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the elder generations
must give way to young. If they don't know, they will start working on bugs. We must give them
chance
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a chance
and trust with
theirs
objective case of they
them
. They will succeed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Experience and knowledge
  • Company culture
  • Professional network
  • Mentoring
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Fresh perspectives
  • Adaptable
  • Innovative solutions
  • Technological advancements
  • Competitive edge
  • Energy levels
  • Drive to succeed
  • Balanced workforce
  • Synergy
  • Dynamic team
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