You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • Describe the item • Explain where and when you left it • Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jeevitha. I was travelling in the

Rajastani

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Rajasthani

Express on May 17, 2020. I am writing

this

letter to seek your help in finding my handbag. I was boarded at

Rajastan

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Rajasthan

on Saturday and arrived

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Tamilnadu on Sunday midnight where I was carrying four bags, but somehow I had missed the handbag

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train

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the train

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. Later in the morning, I had realised the file was missing in the luggage which was left in the compartment. My degree and work experience certificates are in the file which I need to submit to my new employer on or before May 29, 2020. I was travelling in the

first class

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AC coach with

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seat number 10 and the train number is 067898. I hung out my brown colour shoulder bag near to the seat which has the file and silver watch. If you find the bag, could you please give

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me a

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call

then

I will share my address with you to send back

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so that

this

would help me to submit the papers on time for my new employment

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I will send you the cost for

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service,once you share your account details. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jeevitha N

Submitted by Jeevitha on Wed Jun 17 2020

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