Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Investment in the arts has always been debated and belittling for its monetary benefits in comparison to the public

service

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merit it holds. I believe that even though it doesn't weigh well as a public

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service but

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service, but

it definitely holds higher value, with respect to the economy, profession, development and

moral

a state of individual psychological well-being based upon a sense of confidence and usefulness and purpose

morale

boosters for the citizens. Arts mainly represents a form expression, for abstract thoughts and actual real life events. Even though there is denial, in accepting it as a public

service

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, but it's used as one, in various scenarios. There are numerous theatres, museums, gallery's across countries where people visit, generating income for the economy via taxes.

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, these forms of arts

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help

to convey a message or depict and register events or thoughts in peoples mind in

amuch

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a much

more effective way.

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, various inspirational biopics on hard working athletes, war

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and

succesfull

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

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people, made in the past have been well received and embraced by the people, bolstering their moral and encouraging them to work hard in their day to day life. Rather, it is murals on the walls or paintings in the cave, arts is

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a way

the way

of preserving information and we have learned in abundance about the human history from them. More importantly,

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the thing named or in question

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also form

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also forms

has also formed

of talent which a human

poseses

a particular course of action intended to achieve a result

process

, if don't invest in it, it would lead huge discomfort creating unrest among people who actually are good at it. All of poses different talent and supporting each one, is what

marks

engage in

makes

a good economy. Not to forget, it generates foreign interest and tourism complimenting the global image of the country, India is one

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example, where people around the world come to view its ancient scriptures, colourful artwork and

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learn what they have learned. In conclusion, I would like to say, arts isn't purely a public

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, it is a booming industry, and investing it would not only help us gain monetary benefits, but

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various other untapped benefits which might not be visible on a smaller scale.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.5

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cultural enrichment
expression of creativity
promote diversity
enhance social cohesion
boost tourism
job creation
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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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