Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some people who believe that males are competitors by nature.
However
, others disagree.
This
essay will discuss both points of view,
To begin
with, it is obvious to mention that the
nature
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naturally
gifted men with extreme power. It is known from the
hystory
the aggregate of past events
history
and other literature sources
,
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,
to compare to women they considered to be protectors and guards HUnting and doing extremely difficult work developed their physical state making them more brutal and strong than women.
As a result
, women's
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
was to care about the family and children. By the year the role of men has not changed yet. On the other side
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,
,
gender
differenc
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
differences
is not that different in the modern society. The clear example for
this
can be proved by women who take part in mannish sport. There are many situations when women stand by men doing the same job as men do. And
thatts
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that's
not
only example
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the only example
. It is world requirement. To survive in the cruel world, women have to rely only on themselves. To conclude, I
pendown
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pen down
saying that there is no difference. It depends on
person's charachter
Suggestion
a person's character
person's character
and
personality whether
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personality, whether
he is a man or she is a woman.
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