International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Nowadays people often travel from one
country
to another
country
just for
holiday
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a holiday
or vacation. These kind activities familiarly known as an International or Global
Tourism
. There
is
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are
a lot of benefits that global
tourism
give
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gives
to everyone, that could be
for
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in
every
aspects
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aspect
from
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of
economics to international
exposure but
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exposure, but
the problem is
this
condition can
brings
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bring
consequences as well.
This
essay
will addressed
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will address
some benefits and consequences that happen due to
this
trend.
First
for the advantages, At least two parties that will enjoy the benefit of
this activities
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these activities
this activity
.
First
is Government. Because of people is visiting
foreign
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a foreign country
country
,
government
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the government
will
received
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receive
some amount as a duty that paid by
visitor
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visitors
the visitor
.
Second
is
local people
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the local people
that live around those places where visitor visit. Local people usually having a business like accommodation, transportation and Culinary that get profit from the visitors.
On the other hand
, some consequences might
happen especially
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happen, especially
for nature
tourism
.
For instance
, some habitat will
impacted
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impact
because of forbidden activities which is being done by some undisciplined tourist. To avoid these kind of disadvantages,
Government
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the Government
needs to create some prevention action to make sure
this
wont
will not
won't
happen.
For example
,
Government
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the Government
would create rules that every tourist should be accompanied by
local guide
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a local guide
. To wrap up, There
is
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are
unlimited advantages that global
tourism
can bring to
country
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the country
or even to the local people. These benefits will overcome the problem that might happen because of
this
international
tourism
activities
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activity
.
In addition
, To ensure there is no damage
on
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to
the habitat
dan
conjunction used in comparatives
than
down
don
the environment Government must
having
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have
a good
rules
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rule
to make sure the damage
wont
will not
won't
happen.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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