Art is considered as en essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. What do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take an interest in the arts?

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ART

OR ARTWORK SHOULD BE VIEW AS CRICUAL PART OF ALL THE DIFFERENT TYPES CULTURE THROUGHOUT THE GLOBE. BUT NOWADAYS VERY FEW AND LESS PEOPLE TEND TO APPRECIATE

THIS

TYPE OF FINEART AND SKILL AND THEY ARE USED TO FOCUSES ON

SCIENCE

, TECHNOLOGY AND DIFFERENT KIND OF BUSINESSES.

HOWEVER THEIR

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HOWEVER, THEIR

SHOULD BE KIND OF MOTIVATION SO THAT HUMANS TAKE INTEREST IN THE ARTS.

FIRSTLY

ART

OR ARTCRAFT SHOULD BE CONSIDER AS IMPORTANT AS

SCIENCE

, TECHNOLOGY AND

BUSINESS

TOO.

AS A RESULT

ART

IS VERY IMPORTANT AND IT REPRESENTS ALL THE VARIOUS CULTURE. DIFFERENT KINDS OF CULTURE APPERECIATE DIFFERENT TYPE OF ARTS LIKE IT COULD BE ANYTHING

FOR EXAMPLE

- DIFFERENT TYPES OF MANDOLA ARTS, SCULPTURE ARTS

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MODELS ARTS AND ETC.

NEVERTHELESS

WITHOUT

ART

WE CANNOT UNDERSTAND THE HISTORY OF

ART

SECONDLY

, AS GENERATION IS CHANGING DAY BY DAYS VERY FEW PEOPLE APPRECIATE

ART

AND MORE PEOPLES LIKELY ATTRACTED TO

SCIENCE

, MECHANISM AND DIFFERENT KIND OF

BUSINESS

BECAUSE MANY PEOPLE THINK THAT BY OPTAINING FOR

SCIENCE

TECHNNOLOGY AND

BUSINESS

THEY CAN DO MANY SORT OF THINGS AND EARN EASILY.

FINALLY

THERE SHOULD BE MORE GENERAL AWARENESS SHOULD BE DONE ABOUT

ART

AS COMPARED TO

SCIENCE

TECHNOLOGY AND

BUSINESS

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Art is considered as en essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. What do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take an interest in the arts?

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it is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding the changes. Others, however think that changes is always a good thing. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

countries are becoming more and more similar because people ae able to buy same products anywhere in the world do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends. Other people prefer to be alone most of the time. Which way of life do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage, and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.