Art is considered as en essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. What do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take an interest in the arts?

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OR ARTWORK SHOULD BE VIEW AS CRICUAL PART OF ALL THE DIFFERENT TYPES CULTURE THROUGHOUT THE GLOBE. BUT NOWADAYS VERY FEW AND LESS PEOPLE TEND TO APPRECIATE

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TYPE OF FINEART AND SKILL AND THEY ARE USED TO FOCUSES ON

SCIENCE

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, TECHNOLOGY AND DIFFERENT KIND OF BUSINESSES.

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HOWEVER THEIR

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HOWEVER, THEIR

SHOULD BE KIND OF MOTIVATION SO THAT HUMANS TAKE INTEREST IN THE ARTS.

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OR ARTCRAFT SHOULD BE CONSIDER AS IMPORTANT AS

SCIENCE

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, TECHNOLOGY AND

BUSINESS

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TOO.

AS A RESULT

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ART

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IS VERY IMPORTANT AND IT REPRESENTS ALL THE VARIOUS CULTURE. DIFFERENT KINDS OF CULTURE APPERECIATE DIFFERENT TYPE OF ARTS LIKE IT COULD BE ANYTHING

FOR EXAMPLE

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- DIFFERENT TYPES OF MANDOLA ARTS, SCULPTURE ARTS

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MODELS ARTS AND ETC.

NEVERTHELESS

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WITHOUT

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WE CANNOT UNDERSTAND THE HISTORY OF

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SECONDLY

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, AS GENERATION IS CHANGING DAY BY DAYS VERY FEW PEOPLE APPRECIATE

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AND MORE PEOPLES LIKELY ATTRACTED TO

SCIENCE

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, MECHANISM AND DIFFERENT KIND OF

BUSINESS

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BECAUSE MANY PEOPLE THINK THAT BY OPTAINING FOR

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TECHNNOLOGY AND

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THEY CAN DO MANY SORT OF THINGS AND EARN EASILY.

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THERE SHOULD BE MORE GENERAL AWARENESS SHOULD BE DONE ABOUT

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AS COMPARED TO

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TECHNOLOGY AND

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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5 paragraphs

199 words

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Art is considered as en essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. What do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take an interest in the arts?

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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17 Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and obtain the news. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages? (MEDIA)

People from many countries are marrying later and having fewer children. Give reasons why this is happening. Are there any positive or negative developments regarding this?