Art is considered as en essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. What do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take an interest in the arts?

ART
OR ARTWORK SHOULD BE VIEW AS CRICUAL PART OF ALL THE DIFFERENT TYPES CULTURE THROUGHOUT THE GLOBE. BUT NOWADAYS VERY FEW AND LESS PEOPLE TEND TO APPRECIATE
THIS
TYPE OF FINEART AND SKILL AND THEY ARE USED TO FOCUSES ON
SCIENCE
, TECHNOLOGY AND DIFFERENT KIND OF BUSINESSES.
HOWEVER THEIR
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HOWEVER, THEIR
SHOULD BE KIND OF MOTIVATION SO THAT HUMANS TAKE INTEREST IN THE ARTS.
FIRSTLY
ART
OR ARTCRAFT SHOULD BE CONSIDER AS IMPORTANT AS
SCIENCE
, TECHNOLOGY AND
BUSINESS
TOO.
AS A RESULT
ART
IS VERY IMPORTANT AND IT REPRESENTS ALL THE VARIOUS CULTURE. DIFFERENT KINDS OF CULTURE APPERECIATE DIFFERENT TYPE OF ARTS LIKE IT COULD BE ANYTHING
FOR EXAMPLE
- DIFFERENT TYPES OF MANDOLA ARTS, SCULPTURE ARTS
,
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,
MODELS ARTS AND ETC.
NEVERTHELESS
WITHOUT
ART
WE CANNOT UNDERSTAND THE HISTORY OF
ART
.
SECONDLY
, AS GENERATION IS CHANGING DAY BY DAYS VERY FEW PEOPLE APPRECIATE
ART
AND MORE PEOPLES LIKELY ATTRACTED TO
SCIENCE
, MECHANISM AND DIFFERENT KIND OF
BUSINESS
BECAUSE MANY PEOPLE THINK THAT BY OPTAINING FOR
SCIENCE
TECHNNOLOGY AND
BUSINESS
THEY CAN DO MANY SORT OF THINGS AND EARN EASILY.
FINALLY
THERE SHOULD BE MORE GENERAL AWARENESS SHOULD BE DONE ABOUT
ART
AS COMPARED TO
SCIENCE
TECHNOLOGY AND
BUSINESS
.
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