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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter

#job #newspaper #manager #company
Dear Smith,
Iam
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I am
I'm
 writing
this
 letter to apply for the position which
adversited
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advertised
 in the newspaper on 2nd September. I would like to join
this
 position as
i
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 have shifted to
this
 place from ABC because of
growing
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 age of my parents. I have 10 years of experience. In
first
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 five
years
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i
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 served as SRF in NRCPB with lots of dedication and gained immense knowledge regarding
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set up
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 of
lab
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 and how to design experiments.
Then
 in later five years
i
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 worked as RA in IIMR on genetic transformation and had
fullhand
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full hand
full and
full-hand
 experience on various techniques used for genetic transformation. One of my main
strength
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 is flexibility and
this
 is a key
assest
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asset
assist
 in
rapid
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chaning
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changing
 environment. I have good communication skills
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 and enjoy sharing ideas and cooperating as part of
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 team.
Iam
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I am
I'm
reliable
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 and hardworking team player and
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 feel
i
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 would be an asset to your
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workplace
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work place
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.
Iam
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I am
I'm
 looking forward to
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 from you, Yours faithfully
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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