some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty,while say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped .discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Currently, I am working as a civil servant at the Lake Toba Tourism Authority. I work as a junior
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analyst and staff under Accessibility and Infrastructure Division. As a staff of
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planning and executing as well as state budget’s planning and monitoring. As a junior
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analyst, I have obligations, doing research and
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analysis, giving
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recommendation, communicating, coordinating, advocating, consulting, and negotiating
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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