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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

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Dear Mr.Walker, I would like to apply for post of Quality Assurance Manager advertised on
notice board
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the notice board
notice boards
a notice board
 on 8th September. So, my qualification, personal character and work experience make me
perfect candidate
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the perfect candidate
a perfect candidate
 for
this
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 position. Currently, I am a student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration, graduated in 2017. I’m studying
subject
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subjects
 that
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 relevant
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to
 enhancing my management skills. During my studies
i
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I
 worked as
juniors excutive
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a junior executive
juniors executive
junior executive
junior excutive
 in ABC company to improve my communication, leadership skill and manage to work in a big
teams
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team
. While leading and supervision subordinates, I have gained valuable experience for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. My Curriculum Vitae and form are attached. One of my biggest
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strengths
 is flexibility, which proves to be
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an asset
 in
rapid changing work environment
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a rapidly changing work environment
rapidly changing work environment
. I
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 have good communication skill and use to share my ideas and cooperates well with dynamic team.
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I am
 reliable and hardworking as
team player
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a team player
 and
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 feel
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 would be
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an asset
 to your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon, Yours Faithfully,
Submitted by Geetika Gambhir on

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