You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

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Dear Mr.Walker, I would like to apply for post of Quality Assurance Manager advertised on

notice board

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the notice board

notice boards

a notice board

on 8th September. So, my qualification, personal character and work experience make me

perfect candidate

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the perfect candidate

a perfect candidate

for

this

position. Currently, I am a student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration, graduated in 2017. I’m studying

subject

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subjects

that

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relevant

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enhancing my management skills. During my studies

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worked as

juniors excutive

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a junior executive

juniors executive

junior executive

junior excutive

in ABC company to improve my communication, leadership skill and manage to work in a big

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team

. While leading and supervision subordinates, I have gained valuable experience for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. My Curriculum Vitae and form are attached. One of my biggest

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strengths

is flexibility, which proves to be

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an asset

rapid changing work environment

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a rapidly changing work environment

rapidly changing work environment

. I

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have good communication skill and use to share my ideas and cooperates well with dynamic team.

Iam

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I am

reliable and hardworking as

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a team player

and

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feel

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would be

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an asset

to your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon, Yours Faithfully,

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0Word repetition
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16Grammar mistakes
 

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?

Some parents believe that extra private lesson outside school hours, where students work alone with a teach, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition? And give your opinion.