Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree? Share relevant personal experiences.

With women demonstrating their ability to perform just as well as men on the global professional stage, it is no wonder that more and more men are taking on the responsibilities of domestic life. It is argued that all
household
chores should be distributed evenly between dual income couples. The virtues of
this
arrangement will be shown by looking at the positive effects it has on both children and the relationship quality the married couple experiences. For one, parents who share housework provide a good example to their children of the importance of empathy.
For instance
, while working in Dubai, I taught English to children of several dual income families. These children were very proactive when it came to helping their parents with
household
duties. Looking back, I feel these children acted in
this
selfless manner in response to the living models their parents provided. As
this
example shows, parents who equally shoulder the burden of
household
duties pass on worthy character traits to their children.
In addition
to
this
, the relationship quality married couples experience can benefit from their sharing in the challenges of day-to-day life.
For example
,
although
my own mother never worked, she was always very gracious of my father when he would take the time to help
her with duties
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with her duties
around the house.
This
sharing in hardship helped to strengthen my parents’ union and acts as yet another benefit to the equal divvying of
household
duties between married couples. After looking at how equal
burden
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burdens
can benefit a married couple’s
children
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child
and relationship, it is clear that
this
is an opinion that should be supported
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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