You are staying in an alien country. You have recently received a letter from your wife in which she has complained of your son's activities. Write a letter to your son to counsel him. In your letter, write: what you came to know about his behavior why you are upset about such activities what kind of behavior you are expecting from him
My Dear John,
Greetings from Africa!
It's been a really
a
long time since we both have spoken to each other. I would rather say thatCorrect article usage
apply
,
work is keeping me busy most of the Remove the comma
apply
times
. Fix the agreement mistake
time
However
, I do communicate with your mother often on the phone. That's how I get regular updates about your health and activities. But, since last
couple of calls, she seems to be concerned about your behaviour in the school and at home. Change the article
the last
This
is the main reason of
writing a letter to you.
Change preposition
for
Although
, In the past
you have done exceptionally well in your studies, Add a comma
,past
but
since Remove the conjunction
apply
last
term
you have not scored well in your exams. I have Add a comma
,term
also
heard about your increased outings with friends. Well, John
you are a boy, with a bright future. If you will focus your energy on the right things, You will do wonders. My biggest concern is your final year in Add the comma(s)
,John
university
which will decide your future. I would not like to see you Add an article
the university
a university
end-up
working in the garage or construction site. In order to improve on the current situation, I would like you to attend vacation classes to improve on maths and language Correct your spelling
end up
subject
. Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
For example
, keep Correct article usage
a check
Correct your spelling
checklist
check list
Correct your spelling
checklist
on
the things to learn on any given day, which will help you manage Change preposition
of
your
time and effort Change the word
the
require
Change the form of the verb
required
for
Change preposition
apply
it
.
Hope that my message is clear to you. After all, you are the one who will decide your faith. I would expect a better commitment from you towards your studies. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Also
request you to look after your mum till the time I would arrive there.
Add a comma
,Also
Your
Lovingly
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You're
You are
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite