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Some systems require students to speacialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school? What are the benefits of two education systems and what is better ?

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Education
 is the backbone of the society and is the key to be successful in life.My essay will highlight certain points about the a number of subjects taught in one
school
 and the limited subjects taught in the other
school
. A student is often taught many subjects till class 10th.He is made to
study
 Hindi, Engish, Maths, Science, Social Science and other co-curricular subjects.The students are taught all of them without knowing the area of
interest
 or the line in which he can excel.
For instance
, in a public
school
 in India all students are made to
study
 these subjects and if they fail, they are made to repeat the same class again.
This
 develops a sense of shame in the
child
 and mentally disturbs the
child
.The sense of the
education
system
 is not of any worth if the
child
 is deeply pressurised and is not able to enjoy the early childhood days of his life.He is burdened with so many subjects which develops pressure in his brain, leading to many misfortunes.
On the other hand
, if we modify our
education
system
 and make children to
study
 subjects to a certain level.
For example
, a
school
 should give options for choosing a subject. The
child
 should choose subjects based on what he likes, what is
interest
Suggestion
interesting
 is
,
Accept space
,
like if he has
interest
Suggestion
an interest
 in music he should not be made to
study
 science for which it is of no use to him. The benefits of the two
education
system
Suggestion
systems
 are different.For the
first
 one the
child
 becomes more independent and responsible for finishing his syllabus on time, which are followed by weekly test
,
Accept space
,
but if we look at the other
education
system
child
 becomes very irresponsible towards studies and
school
. I would like to conclude by saying that subjects should be taught based on the
interest
 of the
child
 rather than making him to
study
 which will never have good results in the future.
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