Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different views about whether the purpose of museums should be enjoyment or education. What I suggest is these places should try to enhance people’s knowledge by different means of entertainments. One of the main targets of museums is to educate people. If It was not the case, what is the

different

Suggestion

difference

between museums and playgrounds?

museums

Suggestion

Museums

are built to give us information about

variety

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a variety

of

phenomenon

Suggestion

phenomena

.

However

, I personally think if they only focus on education, they will have less visitors. Their visitors will be only limited to high school or university students who are interested in the related subjects in the museums. By having

less audience

Suggestion

a less audience

the less audience

, museums cannot afford their expenditure and will be closed soon.

Therefore

, the purpose, which was educating people, could not be accomplished at all. Museums can add some entertaining sections to their services or mixing educational agendas with some fun activities.

For instance

,

museum

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a museum

the museum

can provide some video games which are related to their studies or some rooms which history is being taught while people are doing board games. When museums try to be amusing, for all aged and people with distinct educational backgrounds, there will be more audiences and

therefore

, more people are educated by a short visit to a museum. They will make more profit and there will be more investment on museum’s facilities. In conclusion, I

suggest

Accept comma addition

suggest, although

although

it is very important for museums to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

educational purposes, they should

also

focus on being amusing for their visitors, so their existence is guaranteed.