Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passsenegr flights, ofte to holiday destinations. some people say that the governmanet should try to reduce the air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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The growing prevalence of

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travelling is contributing to environmental

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worldwide

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the construction of new airports. Low

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fares to the tourist areas is thought to be amongst the leading causes of

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phenomenon that has led many to urge for heavy levies on

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travelling. In my opinion,

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suggestion is flawed and I believe that there are other ways that can be more promising to reduce atmospheric

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. Tourism and other holiday attractions are few of those joys that are already getting scanty because of the time pressures. Since people seldom get a vacation these days, above that planning a holiday trip in these vacations is even uncommon. Asking government to apply heavy taxation on

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fares will

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prevent people from travelling.

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will not only result in the dooming tourism-based economies, but will

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leave people with little entertainment facilities.

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taxation may have some impact in reducing the

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and noise

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, it seems limited and there are far more effective ways of controlling the

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pollution

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. Switching over the vehicles that use fossil fuels to the newer electric cars that have zero emission of harmful gases as well as noise

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would probably be a better solution than limiting the

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travelling.

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, the collective

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caused by vehicles on the roads is much more in comparison to that of planes,

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banning those vehicles which are run on fossil fuels would be much more effective.

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, Pakistan's average requirement for G10 fuel used in planes is about one-tenth of that of gasoline being used in cars and other transport.

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it bolsters the view that cutting fossil fuel consuming cars is more effective than abolishing

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travel. To conclude, hiking

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fares due to heavy taxation will abandon people from travelling

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adding little towards the atmospheric protection.

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it is suggested that measures like introducing electronic cars and preventing deforestation are more fruitful in combating

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pollution

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