Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The main reason of poor education quality among children nowadays is that they spend a lot of their

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watching

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programs. I agree with the statement that

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cannot replace the

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as a learning

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cannot replace books as learning materials due to the fact that children often use improperly

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For instance

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educational

education

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are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children prefer

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are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children preferring

prefer less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children

are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children preferred

are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children prefer

to watch. While there are lots of educative and suitable programs, it is not unusual that a child would prefer to watch programs that entertain more than educating.Another reason

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is not as suitable as a

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because when children learn through

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their focus will be on audio-visual skill, not in learning. It is often said that many children watch TV for long hours and that can damage to their health.

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programs are addictive and many children do not concentrate on other important things like study or outdoor activity.

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cannot replace the

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as learning

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due to

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might be a

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that would be

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a loss

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, if children spend more

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in reading books there is no chance of loosing

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conclusion,

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is more entertaining than books, it cannot become a great

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for education as books are for children. The

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is still the most appropriate learning

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and the

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can never replace it terms of

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the child’s education

a child’s education

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