Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people, while others think the purposes of museums should be to educate, not entertain. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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A group of people believes that
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should be a destination, which fascinates and entertain teenagers, while different groups of people think it should be just for learning purposes.
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, before commenting on my decision, both the
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. Focussing on the
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, the most important argument the supporters put forward is that museums should be excited
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, tourist peoples like to visit those places, where they find entertainment as well as historical arts and
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is the only
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, which attracts them most, in result, it increases in popularity of that
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, teenager’s gets excited when come to have both things at one
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,
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means that they would concentrate more on learning something if they find entertainment at the same location.
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, in the United Kingdom, many museums which do not have academic purpose,
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they décor their location in theme like gaming centre, which encourage more people to visit.
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, the latter
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believer says that museums should know as academic institute.
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with, many times, scientists like to go museums, because historical and interesting objects take
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there, their aim is to learn something new from there, so they do not like if that
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converts into entraining.
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, School teacher’s thinks that a tourist
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can teach students in a practical way than in reality they cannot teach in school, like skeletons of any animals, which needs to have practical learning.
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, in school in America, it’s mandatory to take a tour of museums every Friday so that they understand effectively. To conclude and give my opinion, I would support the former
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that museums should
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contain some entertaining themes.
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, it is the best location for practical learning, I believe that
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would more grow once we add required things for tourist and teenagers.
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