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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

#hotel #city #weather #time #year #system #manager #action
I am writing
this
 letter to express
dissatisfaction
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my dissatisfaction
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 with my stay at your
hotel
 Taj Grande. Unfortunately, due to the malfunctioning of the air conditioner, three nights I spent at your
hotel
 were miserable. It was 12.30 PM when I arrived at the
hotel
. I wanted to rest for some time after the tiring journey from Hyderabad to Toronto. When I switched on the AC, it started making noise and was not working as expected. I called reception stating the issue and they promised to fix it in two hours but no help arrived and no
further
 updates. I
had
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 manage with the fan for the entire night. I choose your
hotel
 after reading reviews online, but much to my chagrin I realized that they were not exactly true. I would like you to refund the amount I have paid for the air conditioner room.
In addition
, I request you to check all the amenities before booking to customers. Please consider my request to refund and do the needful Thank you in advance for your help. Yours faithfully, Prasad Vadakapuram.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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