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Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this

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There is no doubt that these days, working for a while after graduation from
school
 is a great way to get some practical skills about your major and save money before going to
university
. The question is
it will
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it, will
 it affect young people to get a career for a few years after graduation from
school
 and go to
university
 in their life? In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion In terms of advantages,
work
experience
 is one of the important, a matter that young people must-have before entering
to
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into
in
 the
job
. The main reason given to support
this
 claim is that
help
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helps
 them to get more
experience
 by learning more about
work
 environments and take responsibility. To illustrate, many students in America
try
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have tried
 to find a
job
 before going to
university
 because help them to get a good
job
 after graduation
university
 essay.
In other words
, someone will have a big opportunity to be accepted in a company if they have the related
work
experience
 to the offered position
instead
 of those without
experience
.
However
, young people who take a
job
 for a few years before going to
university
 will face some problems in their life.
firstly
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Firstly
, probably they forget the basic knowledge which had been taught in
school
, so they will find it more difficult to learn.
Secondly
, Their academic incentive will decrease to complete their study at the
university
 and they need to improve their important knowledge in their major to get a good
job
.
This
 is because
work
 could become a large distraction and chances of keeping to
work
 is far greater than to the continues their study at
university
. In conclusion,
although
 it is said the academic incentive will decrease to complete their study at the
university
,
work
experience
 is important to get a good
job
 after graduating
university
.
Therefore
, I believe that the benefits those people who
work
 after
school
 to get more information about
there
of them or themselves
their
 major in
university
 and know the
work
evinvermant
 after graduating from the
university
 so they have a background about their
job
 in the future.
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