Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn’t write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Stephen and David, I have received the letter and the holiday pictures from you 15 days back. I would like to thank you for the memories that you have sent me. I had spent wonderful days during my vacation. I was pampered by both of you during my stay and I would have been lost without you in the new country. I apologize
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for the delayed reply as I was leaving for my business trip when I received your package. I have just returned yesterday from my business trip and opened the pack, which bring a lot of memories
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my mind. These memories gave me an idea to invite you
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my city so that we can again stay and enjoy
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ourselves together
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. I invite you to visit my place during your
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vacation. There are
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of attractions in London
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London
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the London
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Eye, museums and parks. It will be really exciting if you can make
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plan. We can again enjoy being together for few more days. I am looking forward to hearing your reply. Regards, John
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