You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, – say what the problem is – describe the accommodation you thought you were getting – ask the provider to solve the problem Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Irene Vincent and I had joined

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a 3 months health informatics course in

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. I am writing to inform you regarding the inconveniences that

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am facing with the college hostel accommodation provided.

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, the area is compact and there are 4 inhabitants, which makes it more congested.

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, the ventilation and air circulation are limited,

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I feel very suffocated. Since the windows are small, it is required to use lights most of the time, which I felt very disturbing.

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, the place is noisy and I can’t concentrate on my studies. I had expected a single or a double room with enough space and lighting, which would allow me to have a good impact on my studies. I would really appreciate

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if you could allot me

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the expected room so that I can have a better life in the hostel. If there are any

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changes in rent, I am ready to pay more,

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I need a large and bright area which would encourage my studies. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks in advance. Your’s faithfully, Irene Vincent