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The pie chart demonstrates the rates of the average family
food
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 budget spending on home cooking meal and
restaurant
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 meal in the year 1970 to 2000, while the graph compares the total of
food
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 by fast
food
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restaurant
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 and sit-down
restaurant
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 at the same duration. Overall, the concern in spending budget on
restaurant
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 meal and the total of fast
food
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 that been consumed have increased significantly over the time period. At the beginning, regarding to the chart, 90 % people spending their
food
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 budget for the home cooking meal and only 10 % of the
restaurant
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 meal.
However
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, The
restaurant
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 meal gained popularity and has been increased gradually less than a fifth in 1980, more than a
third
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 in 1990 and have the same percentage with the home-cooked meal at 50% by the end of the time period. Turning to, the number of meals that consumed from a fast
food
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restaurant
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 and sitting down
restaurant
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 are equal on 20 number meal/year in 1970. The sitting down
restaurant
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 has a steady upward trend for the following years, which shows the value at about 25 in 1980, 40 in 1990 and around 45 by the end of the time period.
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, the number of fast
food
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restaurant
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 has slightly increased in the
first
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 ten years and it jumped up at about 90 by the end of year 2000.
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