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Some think that resident should be responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others says it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Today we live in a community where common people and
government
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the government
 are depend each other. Everyone has their own rights and duties one
such
 duties are keeping the area neat
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 In the same time the law enforcement is striving hard to join hands with the locals to make the living society clean
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 Numerous people don't have time to look after the cleanliness of the area since most of the people are working
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So many non governmental organizations have been formed to do the social work for cleaning
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 One
such
 NGO is ugly
indian
the end of a word (a suffix or inflectional ending or final morpheme)
ending
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 they are a group of young working professionals who come together
in
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on
 the weekends and clean areas.
This
 was started in
bangalore
an industrial city in south central India (west of Chennai)
Bangalore
 and now it is spread across the metro cities in the country
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 The
government
has
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has also come
also
 came up with
lot
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lots
a lot
 of plans to keep the
livinghood
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living hood
 clean
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A few years back they introduced
swach bharath scheme
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the such Bharath scheme
swach Bharath scheme
such Bharath scheme
such bharath scheme
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the main aim of
this
 is to make awareness among the citizens about the clean
india
either extremity of something that has length
end
. In the yearly
finacial
involving financial matters
financial
 budget the
government
 has allocated a notable amount for
this
 work
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 so
this
 had a significant impact in the minds of people
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As the cascading effect of
this
 the seeing the clean roads in many parts of the country
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It is
also
 seen that lot modern techniques are used by them to keep the area tidy. To conclude, it is everyone's duty to make the city clean irrespective of
government
 or local people.They both are equally responsible for the same.We are in the era where the everyone has to spend some time making the living place
hygine
a condition promoting sanitary practices
hygiene
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