Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion.

Smoking is detrimental

for

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to

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health. It can cause damage to our lungs and

led

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lead

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ourselves

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us

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through several diseases.

That is

why many business companies and organizations prohibit smoking in their offices. Even some

goverments

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governments

have banned smoking in all public

places

. I agree with

this

course of action against smoking in public

places

and in offices. Smoking is badly injurious for us. It gradually affects our lungs and

vanished

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our respiratory system. Consecutive smoking can cause lung cancer. Cigarette contains nicotine that slowly

mitigate

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mitigates

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our

brains

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brain's

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mobility. Smoking is not

affectous

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effective

for individuals only.

For example

, If a smoker smokes

nearby

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near

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a

non smoker

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non-smoker

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person

then

both are equally

affectable

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effective

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. So, smoking in public

places

is not acceptable.

Besides

it contaminates the air

also

. The air gets polluted by the

smokes

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smoke

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exhaled by a smoker.

Childrens

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Children's

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health

are

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badly disrupted because of smoking. So to give them a fresh environment we should quit smoking in public

places

.

Moreover

, In an

office

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office,

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many people exist

whom

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who

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dont

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don't

have the

habits

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habit

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of smoking. So if someone smokes in front of them

this

can distract their attention from working.

Besides

it can put

impacts

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on

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apply

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their health

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apply

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also

.

On the other hand

, Despite having many disadvantages, Smoking has some advantages

also

.

For instance

, nicotine can increase the strength of

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the

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working capability of a person. Nicotine can

active

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activate

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our brain vehemently, and can

charged

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charge

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up

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apply

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a person to come out

from

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of

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his fainted state. Many people use smoking as their refreshing tool. Most people use it to reduce their daily stress. In conclusion, I must say that Smoking is not a good thing. It can affect both individuals and

masses

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at the same time. Those who

dont

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don't

smoke, should not be got affected by it. So, By considering

everyones

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everyone's

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interest

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interests

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smoking should be banned and restricted from the country and from

the

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apply

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working institutions

also

.

This

will help to build a safe and sound society around the world.